Describe Writing

We have been doing  fireworks for our writing.We had to describe the picture and write down the senses that we experienced if we were there.

The  fireworks  exploding in the sky and the fireworks. feel the one of that fire sick and they are one to look It is cool to see and watch the sick fire and.I  hear exploding and bang  fireworks   and they are cool to look it .The sick fire and the fireworks  and i smell smoke and fire in my smell .and they are one you can hear it and so they are one to look and there was food and i taste the food in the places in the fire. were places and we look in the sky there were colour in the sky and star and some people like to look at the fireworks  we are looking at the fireworks some people get food in fireworks we thad a good look in the  sky. and i see the sky and the star they are excellent.