we have been doing our topic in the Arrival pre Euroean hare it is my writing
the painting is not real ethn it looks like it is real it is not real some people thinek is real it is not real
they were not starving or dead on the waka is not real in the painting is not real .
they migrants not maori they were not real and the people are not real too .
portrayed they are lucky to foued a land and they are making a story.
Europeans back when they painting they are some people are real .
Well done.You have the right ideas.
Just remember to start each sentence with a capital letter and end with a full stop.