Me,Lucca,Arthur and Caleb went to Timezone so we could play some games and have fun. We went on the bumper cars.We went around the floor as there was no track for the cars to go on..
We got hungry so we got some food.The food tasted good.We ate dumplings from Westfield.The soya sauce on the dumplings tasted so good.I could smell the dumplings as they were being steamed in the pot.It smelled good.
We played bowling.Arthur was first and I was 2nd. Caleb got 3rd and Lucca was last.We could see other people bowling in a different
People were shouting because. They were having a lot of fun. and they stop for a Minute. they Continue the shouting it was fun .
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